Rain Rain!
When will you come again?
Come, and wash away this pain;
Which has been making us all SO insane.
Let us not complain,
About NO Rain.
Now show us some brain,
And don’t be more inane.
We don’t want you to disdain.
Just don’t be the cause of all our bane,
All we want from you is to be a little more sane.
Please be our exuberant mundane.
O Mighty Rain!
Looks like the rain gods *did* answer your prayers!
Din’t it rain in Delhi?
Enjoy! 😀
This is extremely bad. Is it a joke? If it is a joke it isn’t especially funny. There is little originality, it is cliched, crass and poorly written. It isn’t so much poetry as a student experimenting with the English language. Your use of English is inane and deeply unsophisticated. There is no imagery or metaphor in this ‘poem’. It reads like something a 12 year old would write.
If it isn’t a joke then it’s hilarious and I will save a copy to show my friends because I’m sure they’ll enjoy it as much as I did.
@ priya
Yes it did! And it has been ever since 🙂
@ Ida Gasp
Well, it’s a free world we live in. And we all are entitled to express our opinions. I respect your’s. I just wish you’d have respected mine. Nonetheless, I sincerely hope that your friends enjoy it as much you did.